Here's the not-so-long awaited sequel to that clichéd short story I put up a while ago. I wonder if this one is any better...
Taste 2: Spicy
It was another
lazy afternoon. The beach seemed crisp and powdery, a shade of bronzed yellow
almost, mimicking the voluptuous blondes that were sun-bathing themselves.
While the tourists seemed all eyes for the pristine beauty, both natural and
otherwise, no one noticed him slip into a wicker chair outside the cabana,
overlooking the sea. As the sweet ocean spray wafted in the breeze, Juan España
sipped a Cuba Libré, enjoying the breeze. A thin scar ran down his temple, a
reminder of his past….
Sao Paolo had
always been a discovery for him. The back streets filled with the gaiety of
life and the scent of paprika blending in with the maracas, celebrating the
vitality of life. And Mardi Gras was just the culmination of the city’s entire
energy. She had fallen from heaven, literally, as he had caught her when she
fell off her float. One look and he had fallen too, fallen into the passion
that seems to run within the very veins of Latin men. She apologised and leapt
out of his arms to join the float once again. But he had made his mark and when
he lay in bed, he heard the door open and felt her slither in beside him, a
smell of paprika and roses melding into him. All night, as the city made merry,
they did the same, their passion blazing like the Brazilian sun. The morning
brought reality back to them but the bond had been made. He had continued to
meet her and their romance blossomed amongst the shaded cafés and streets. She
was free-spirited, lively and a woman of impulse and passion, a complete
contrast to Juan, who was a quiet, soulful man. Yet they found bliss in their
dichotomy as they frolicked all throughout Sao Paolo. The entire world seemed
to pale before their love as Juan could not help but dream of their future
together. But his dream was shattered one evening when, as they walked back, a
hustler stuck a knife in his back and demanded his belongings. Quick as a
flash, Juan tried to grasp the man’s wrist and incapacitate him when the
hustler swung wildly, scraping his temple. Blinded by his blood for an instant,
he did not see him stab her and make off. The world seemed to slow down as he
saw the blood gushing from her heart. That night was a blur of activity as he somehow
found help to get her to a hospital and rushed her to the Operating Room. He
could hear his heart drumming against his chest, blotting out the whole world.
All of a sudden, he heard the doors open. All he could make out was the
doctor’s silhouette, blood-spattered and ethereal, the light blocking his face…
Juan suddenly felt a
hand on his shoulder and a whiff of paprika and roses swept his senses. “You
always did love that perfume, didn’t you?” he said, with a hint of smile,
looking into the same eyes that had ignited his passion 30 years ago.
Whoa! What description ! And the story formed and flowed so beautifully..! Apart from the daily observations and your usual (yet each so different) posts, you can write short fictional pieces also so well ! Gifted you are, Tarun ! :)
ReplyDeleteUnprecedented theme...It doesn't even seem to be a cliched one. I found this even better than an excerpt from a Paulo Coelho romance! BTW: The way your main character negotiates thru' the memories of his lost love is just fan-tastic...akin to traveling thru time. If only life provides us with a rewind button.
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